Disclaimer- I can't draw for toffee. Personal not proffesional opinion.
Nice figure work, the right hand does seem to disappear into rather than hold the tanks. The tanks are a tad too oval and sadly what you intended to be a reflection of the clouds makes them seem a little see through. Speaking of light effects- why have glisten in the eyes and head hair but not elsewhere? A bit more might have been nice. The goggles are a bit asymetrical- keyhole shaped. The mouth piece has two ports- is this a fury adaption? The flow of the left tale gets a little angular towards the bottom.
Overall, though this is good work with what can be a very tricky program.
>>full pic you say >>no download button you say I think you forgot something! It's good, you're improving a little each time, although Calufrax has already pointed out most everything I would've mentioned. Do you sometimes get impatient and rush on pieces of it? Like for instance on [link] the lingerie and the body is good and detailed and shadowed nicely, but the head looks pretty weird. (or is at a weird perspective) It feels a bit like the head was from an older drawing then shopped in if that makes any sense.
Nice figure work, the right hand does seem to disappear into rather than hold the tanks. The tanks are a tad too oval and sadly what you intended to be a reflection of the clouds makes them seem a little see through. Speaking of light effects- why have glisten in the eyes and head hair but not elsewhere? A bit more might have been nice. The goggles are a bit asymetrical- keyhole shaped. The mouth piece has two ports- is this a fury adaption? The flow of the left tale gets a little angular towards the bottom.
Overall, though this is good work with what can be a very tricky program.
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